Well, a little change anyway. I'm making a change to the last chapter I posted. I decided I didn't like how I worded some things between Lily and Amy, so I'm going to fix it. Lily's slowly starting to become a bit Mary Sue for my taste, so I need to fix it. Keep an eye out!
EDIT: Never mind. No changes. I read it again and realized that it makes sense... silly me!!!
It's funny how things somehow turn out to be alright after all. And that's always the threat with OC's in fanfiction--having them turn into Mary Sues. In my opinion, Lily is definitely NOT a Mary Sue.
ReplyDeleteDefinately not a Mary Sue. She suffers too much for that. And she gets snappy. Mary Sues never get snappy.
ReplyDeleteYou're such a tease. ;P
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